Cinematography video feedback/learner response

 1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.

www:Good fixed camera and framing

Different angles

steady pans

correct labelling

Appropiate soundwork and the tempo matches the editing of the video

Range of shots

ebi

avoid zoom in/out

pan back/forrth

more of a narrative

Abrupt ending

2) Type up your feedback from fellow students.

www: range of shots
good establishing shots

fade-ins/outs

nice transitions and calm music pace

Ebi:

zoom in and out

Narrative

Ending abrupt

Access to the shotlist isn't available

Could be a bit more creative and add a narrative

3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs

I used a wide variety of shots and angles effectively.

My transitions, pans, and sound design worked smoothly and matched the tone.

My framing and establishing shots helped set the scene clearly.

ebi

I need to avoid overusing zooms and unnecessary camera movement.

I should include a clearer narrative or storyline to give the video more purpose.

I need to make sure my ending is smoother and not abrupt, and keep all planning documents (like a shot list) accessible.

4) Learner response: think about what you learned about cinematography, making the video, and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?

From making the video and watching others, I learned how important controlled camera movement is and that a strong narrative makes a video more engaging.For coursework in the summer,I will plan my storyline more clearly and keep planning documents organised.I also learned useful tips like matching music to the pace of the edit, keeping transitions smooth,and using shot types with purpose.I want to keep practising, keeping shots ready, and plan narrative sequences and improve how my videos end.